Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Sliferjam/The Changing Story
User:Sliferjam/The Changing Story[edit]
This is nowhere near done. I intend to put a shitload of more story in there. Any tips? How do you like the idea? It's when you refresh the page, you get a new story. I had to nickname the main character Hans just because I can't re-put down a <option><choice> thingy. Is it possible? Any other helpful hints? Maybe I should make a thing where it {{ }} and links to each of them. Would that work? Input please.
so sayeth Sliferjam ~ Talk * Sock * Jam * Gallery * Fearless Fosdick? 
01:23, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
- First off, the format is <choose><option>Option</option><option>...</choose>. But I think something like this has already been done.-Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 01:28, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
Well, the article seems like it'll be funny when it's done, and it's a pretty orig. idea, but why'd you put it on PR if it's not ready to really be reviewed(Under Constructions)? Most of the stories seemed too short to really write a helpful review for. It looks good so far, but it just doesn't seem ready for a full review quite yet. P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon 
(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 02:25, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
- That's really the author's decision to put it up if it's finished or not, you know... it's a pretty small non-issue. --
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02:34, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 0 | None |
| Concept: | 0 | Don't Get It |
| Prose and formatting: | 0 | Stubby, not encyclopedia |
| Images: | 0 | none |
| Miscellaneous: | 0 | none |
| Final Score: | 0 | keep working on it, since it's your subpage, it can't be huffed, but if someday, you want it to become it's own article, keep on working. |
| Reviewer: | --Sir Manforman  18:58, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
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