Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/A bunch of aristocrats fucking. Awesome vid
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A bunch of aristocrats fucking. Awesome vid[edit]
This is my winning entry to the Aristocrat's Turkey Day Ball, with a new title. I'd like to give it a go for featurehood. -- 15Mickey20 (talk to Mickey) 14:31, 30 December 2007 (UTC)
- Dibs.
Contestant CUN -- VFH NotM Buzz Ctrbs 19:26, 30 December 2007 (UTC)
- Write a little bit more, contestant, and I'll count it. I'm watching this page. • <-> (Dec 31) 03:26
- I don't see an issue with the review. First off, there's no sections in the article, and second of all, there isn't really an issue with being satisfied with an article, is there? It seems to me that he commented on the parts that needed commenting and didn't add any superfluous information as to fixing what wasn't broken. --
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03:34, 31 December 2007 (UTC)
- I don't see an issue with the review. First off, there's no sections in the article, and second of all, there isn't really an issue with being satisfied with an article, is there? It seems to me that he commented on the parts that needed commenting and didn't add any superfluous information as to fixing what wasn't broken. --
- I don't usually look at what they're reviewing. I guess that makes sense. • <-> (Dec 31) 04:42
- Write a little bit more, contestant, and I'll count it. I'm watching this page. • <-> (Dec 31) 03:26
| Humour: | 9 | No complaints about humor. For an Aristocrats joke, it's spot on. No improvements suggestible or necessary. |
| Concept: | 10 | It's possibly the most original rundown of the Aristocrats joke I've seen. Brilliant concept. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8.5 | The text is fine, but it seems almost too grammatical for YouTube comments. I'm on the fence about whether changing that would add or subtract from the article, though. If you really want to experiment with that, go for it, but it's just a thought. |
| Images: | 7 | My main hesitation in this article is the image quality. I might be nitpicky, but the text of the comments is strange; the color behind it is off, the names feel very cramped in the boxes, and it doesn't really reflect the layout of YouTube comments. If you could get rid of that discoloration and make it look a smidge more like the comment layout, then it'd be perfect. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8.6 | Avg'd using Template:Pee. |
| Final Score: | 43.1 | This won the Ball, and rightly so. Consider touching up the images a bit and making it look more like a YouTube comment page, but if this were to be nominated for VFH now, I'd be first in line to vote for. |
| Reviewer: |  Contestant CUN -- VFH NotM Buzz Ctrbs 19:42, 30 December 2007 (UTC)
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