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UnNews:Slow News Day angers activists[edit]

This article is completely unrelated to, but partially inspired by, Starnestommy's article. Review appropriately, keep in mind the ironic undertones. --Littleboyonly.jpg TKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK Oldmanonly.jpg 02:30, 6 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8 Well written. It seems like every so often, a news anchor really can be replaced with a mentally challenged person. Also enjoyed Asperger's Syndrome reference
Concept: 9 A new take on the explanation for a slow news day.
Prose and formatting: 6 A few times had to go back and reread a sentence or two or three or four. Needs to be cleaned up. ALso, the activists are never really mentioned other than your title.
Images: 9 Good picture of Bill O' Reilly. Makes him seem pretty slow...
Miscellaneous: 8 The reference to people like Larry David and the comment by Roger Ailes really add to the article
Final Score: 40 Pretty well done. The grammar could be fixed up, and maybe change a few jokes, but overall a good read.
Reviewer: --RBnumber 15:36, 12 June 2007 (UTC)