Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:Evelyn, the Modified Dog
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UnBooks:Evelyn, the Modified Dog[edit]
Time for my bi-annual post-PLS pee review article barrage. TLB said this could go VFH, but a formal review
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01:36, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8.5 | It's very cute, but never quite verges on hysterical. On that note, I can't really suggest any improvements. Frank Zappa's introduction is masterful (I love the arbitrary attack on censorship). However, the typical UnBooks device of introducing a very short book at very great length is tiresome...and expected. And the article doesn't sufficiently emphasize Evelyn's "unusual state" as a piano. Seeing as that gag is the entire point of the article, you ought to play it up. |
| Concept: | 10 | This is the most interesting "high concept" I've heard in ages, which is half my disappointment with the article itself. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Excellent prose: polished, grammatically flawless, and downright funny. I love many of the little touches, the one-liners. Thank you so very much for using commas (unlike ninety percent of people on the internet). |
| Images: | 6 | Sorry to kill your average, but there are two pictures, and neither is particularly funny (although you make good use of the "cover photo"). |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | Averaged from your other scores and rounded up to compensate for the Image score. |
| Final Score: | 42.5 | I'd vote for it! |
| Reviewer: | Soy el Morsa 16:46, 29 February 2008 (UTC) | |