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Part two of my post-PLS pee review barrage. This is my most hastily produced piece, and understandably lacks the most polish. Review with caution. -- T​K​F​​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​CK 01:41, 12 February 2008 (UTC)

Humour:	8	I like it. The history section is especially good: "It passed its time alternating between Scrabble tournaments in the morning and brutal slayings at night" is just classic. Things I would improve on are that the death section seems a little rushed, and the purpose could be expanded (that's where your commented "lack of polish" kicks in").
Concept:	6	It's a nice twist...but with overuse I can't help but just think "Meh". Kudos on downplaying the German kid part though.
Prose and formatting:	9	As usual, absolutely no complaints here.
Images:	9	There isn't the expected slew of .gifs. That's a very good thing. The top picture is exactly what a creature article's top picture should be: concise, giving the reader an image of what the author is talking about. The other image is also very representative.
Miscellaneous:	8	Since Uncognito has been infinibanned, I guess I'll do I've done this.
Final Score:	40	This has the potential to be FA, definitely. However, like you say, it just needs a little more polish, a little more expansion, particularly the purpose section (which I would also move up a bit, but meh).
Reviewer:	Uncognito 07:50, 12 February 2008 (UTC) –—Hv (talk) 29/02 16:06