HowTo talk:Bend a spoon
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From Pee Review[edit]
Humour: | 7 | You hooked me but didn't make me laugh, Try overexagerating the situation. |
Concept: | 8 | It's good for a HowTo: Article. |
Prose and formatting: | 7 | Nice but there's very few "WOW" areas, (bold, italic, etc.) |
Images: | 9 | You got a wide variety. |
Miscellaneous: | 6 | Can I think of anything else. |
Final Score: | 37 | See footnotes. |
Reviewer: | NXWave 15:00, 30 July 2007 (UTC) |
It's great but the subject could be more overexaggerated and some "WOWing" may be needed. --NXWave 15:00, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. This article kind of walks a fine line between "truth" and exaggeration — I'll see if I can improve it, exaggerate it more, without it becoming so overexaggerated it's not funny. – Sir Skullthumper, MD (criticize • writings • SU&W) 15:18 Nov 21, 2024 16:01, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
- Maybe you should try getting a review from a non-NXWave. -- 21:18, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
I did patch up a few sections, but a second opinion would be most appreciated. – Sir Skullthumper, MD (criticize • writings • SU&W) 15:18 Nov 21, 2024 02:22, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
Humour: | 9 | Rather humo(u)rous, I must say |
Concept: | 10 | Original |
Prose and formatting: | 10 | No complaints. |
Images: | 10 | They do well the article. |
Miscellaneous: | 10 | For an article about SPOONS! |
Final Score: | 49 | 49. Approved. Stamped. Nomming |
Reviewer: | -RAHB 02:32, 1 August 2007 (UTC) |
I may be on to something here.[edit]
I deem the line "If you do not have a spoon, it is highly recommended you go out and buy one now" line to be worthy of an injoke. I just hope others agree. Conniving 04:41, 11 August 2007 (UTC)