UnNews talk:Pretzel assassin caught on White House lawn
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UnNews:Pretzel Assassin Caught on White House Lawn[edit]
I'm putting this up again because I truly believe the person who reviewed it first did not know that President Bush choked on a pretzel. So here it goes. My first in the saga. --Hell0ihateyou 19:13, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7.5 | This is a good idea. The guy who reviewed you before had no clue what he was talking about. |
| Concept: | 10 | I would of never thought of this, very original |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | flowed nicely |
| Images: | 10 | Perfect....hilarious |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | add more humor, plus make it a tad longer |
| Final Score: | 41.5 | Thanks for reviewing my article |
| Reviewer: | Spatz 23:41, 20 May 2007 (UTC) | |
| Humour: | 6 | Eh. This might have been funnier 5 years ago. Now it just feels dated. |
| Concept: | 4 | I easily could have thought of this, and my guess is that several other people already have. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Despite its one-joke premise, it manages to be a smoothly written article. Good use of links. |
| Images: | 6 | The lone image is mildly funny but not very high quality. |
| Miscellaneous: | 4 | I am well aware that Bush choked on a pretzel, but the fact is that it happened so long ago that this article makes it seem like you've been in a coma for half a decade. It's just not fresh at all. |
| Final Score: | 27 | It's not as good as you think it is. |
| Reviewer: | --  16:23, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
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It's short, but I'm going to write several more articles related to this topic. Enjoy. --Hell0ihateyou 23:23, 19 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 1 | Sorry |
| Concept: | 5 | Errr |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | Excellent flow |
| Images: | 5 | Image not funny |
| Miscellaneous: | 2 | Purely Random |
| Final Score: | 23 | Not really feature material |
| Reviewer: | User:Hawthorn Peebles/sig 23:38, 19 May 2007 (UTC) | |
Do you live in America? Are you not aware that Bush choked on a pretzel? --Hell0ihateyou 02:25, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
- For the record, that happened a really long time ago. This article is extremely overdue, to say the least. --
TKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK 
03:18, 20 May 2007 (UTC) - Yes, but the whole point is that the pretzel returned to assassinate him again. duh. --69.112.193.36 22:01, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
I thought this article was amusing Spatz 23:59, 20 May 2007 (UTC)