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UnScripts:OH SHIT!!!! I Fucked My Girlfriend's Mother!!!! (history, logs)

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Score: -4 times I fucked my girlfriends mother--If you're 555 then I'm Number of the Beast.jpg Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 04:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

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If you're 555 then I'm Number of the Beast.jpg Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 04:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
For: 4
  1. Symbol for vote.svg Nom & Fucking For I really enjoyed making this. It has been Pee reviewed and I made changes from it. Enjoy!--If you're 555 then I'm Number of the Beast.jpg Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 04:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
  2. For. I love it! But it definitely needs some touching-up before getting featured. Scofield 09:36, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Symbol for vote.svg Hah. Mrowa 10:42, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Symbol for vote.svg For and Spiritual For Made me laugh and held my interest. This isn't so bad that a little work, a few additions, and a few seconds to jack-off won't solve. Aleister 13:37 24 12
  5. Symbol for vote.svg For. --M&M (christmas mood) Christmastrree.jpg 16:11, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
Against: 8
  1. Against. Needs more work for me. The style just doesn't work and where it is supposed to come off as funny, I find it is coming across as juvenile. No upset intended, but I don't see this as an FA. ChiefjusticeXBox 07:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
  2. There are too many exclamation marks in the title!!!! And the article itself is poorly executed and visually unappealing. -- Brigadier General Sir Zombiebaron 07:13, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Symbol against vote.svg Nah. —Sir SockySexy girls.jpg Mermaid with dolphin.jpg Tired Marilyn Monroe.jpg (talk) (stalk)Magnemite.gif Icons-flag-be.png GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 07:18, 24 December 2010
  4. Against. This belongs to VFD not VFH. Hiroyoshi 13:31, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
    Sticks and stones can break Iwillkillyou333's bones, but words will just get him angry and Hewillkillyou. Aleister 13:38 24 12
    That's right, bitch. Besides, this ain't even close to be VFD material.--If you're 555 then I'm Number of the Beast.jpg Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 02:21, December 25, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Against. Terrible. Needs a complete re-working. Sycamore (Talk) 14:33, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Juvenile subject and execution aside, there are way too many exclamation points. Rather vain, too...

1234 ~ 16px-Pointy.png 19:40, 24 December 2010

  1. Hilarious title.....and not a whole lot else. --Roman Dog Bird 22:29, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Symbol against vote.svg Against. You build all that up and right at the end she just says that she knew about it all along? Then they have a three-way? How can you do this to me, man?! Worst plot idea ever! --Wilytank can be a pain in the ass. 18:33, December 25, 2010 (UTC)
Comments:
  • Comment: Take the criticism in stride and fix the article. My first turnoff is seeing the Russian reversal quote - way too cliche. Since the title lends itself to a juvenile rant, wouldn't it be surprising and perhaps amusing if it were written Shakespeare style or with some form of highbrow prose? Just a suggestion. Take another shot, surprise everyone and get it into the net. I know you can do it.--DRStrangesig5.png Sherman.png Fingertalk.png  11:16, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

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