Uncyclopedia:VFH/First!!!! (Back Again)

Vote	Score: -2.5 First posts
Nominated by:	If you're 555 then I'm Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 03:29, July 1, 2010 (UTC)
For: 2.5	Nom and For. Did alot of changes, its in the best shape of its life--If you're 555 then I'm Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 03:29, July 1, 2010 (UTC) For. 65.78.70.152 02:58, July 2, 2010 (UTC) Sure. —Sir Socky (talk) (stalk) GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 03:01, 2 July 2010
Against: 5	Against. It's a lot better than it was back on the pee queue, but I still don't think it's good enough for featuring. Kudos on improving it quite a bit, though.--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) On Friday, 03:10, July 02 2010 UTC Against. Sorry bud, not enough changed since I reviewed the article for you for me to vote yes. You still have some spelling and grammar issues to deal with. I'd say go through the review I did for you again and consider some of the criticisms I offered there. -- Sir SF13 (Talk) GUN WotM RotM FBotM VFH SK Maj. ΥΣΣ 03:05 EST 2 July, 2010 Against. Spelling/grammar issues aside (and the fact that it needs a couple more pics, and the pics to be more sensibly distributed), it still needs work, for me. It's alright, but not great. --UU - natter 10:09, Jul 2 Against. Poorly written. -- natural Ape (burn) (Riot Porn) 01:17, July 4, 2010 (UTC) Against. If it was First on You Tube then that would have made more sense but as the last paragraph 'Other Uses' acknowledges other Firsts then perhaps that should have gone top instead and then go on about You Tube firsts. *RomArtusImperator ®** (Orate) 11:15, July 4, 2010 (UTC)
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