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Quadruple agent[edit]
I'm hilariously stuck at the moment. I'm sure I can come up with more examples after a long night's sleep and a pint of Old Peculiar, but I need a) pictures and b) content other than examples. The latter is a lot more difficult to conjure up.
TheDarthMoogle (talk) 20:45, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
I will attempt to do this sometime this week however if anyone else wishes to do it please go ahead. Sir ScottPat (talk) 12:53, May 29, 2013 (UTC)
Humour: | 8 | I like your jokes. Here are some suggestions of improvement.
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Concept: | 8 | Good overall but needs more separate jokes than just the one which is confusing the reader.
Several completely new ideas I may suggest:
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Prose and formatting: | 9 | No improvements here except for links to other articles which you desperately need. |
Images: | Several images can be added. I know that you didn't do it as you don't know which ones to choose, so here is what I can suggest. | |
Miscellaneous: | 7 | Good article and I liked reading what you already have but more different topics should be raised up there. |
Final Score: | 32 | A very good contribution, I hope my review will help you to keep going! Final score is out of 40. |
Reviewer: | Anton (talk) 18:27, June 3, 2013 (UTC) |