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HowTo:Write Good

After a very helpful review from a total boob, I have reworked it a little bit and am resubmitting, if anyone cares.

TPLN 00:22, 26 February 2009 (UTC)

Ahhhaha...I get it...because Tit...funny ~SirTagstit • VFH • NotM • PEEING • CPT • RotM • BFF 01:09, 26 February 2009 (UTC)

No, it isn't funny. I hate stuff that isn't funny. I'm going to eat a worm. --TPLN 01:12, 26 February 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	10	Fan-fucking-tastic. I laughed out loud several times, which is problematic because it's 1:20AM and my roommate is asleep. The wonderfully bad advice, the "English jokes," the "it was a dark..." beginning, and the similies. Brilliant. Fucking brilliant.
Concept:	10	Fucking brilliant.
Prose and formatting:	9	You write "writed" instead of "written" at one point, though I'm fairly certain this is intentional. Bad joke alert: you write good! A-ha, a-ha, a-ha. *slaps knee*
Images:	7	Two good, appropriate images. Fittingly, this is a text-driven article, and doesn't need too many images. Perhaps try finding one more, to break up the rather texty middle just a bit.
Miscellaneous:	10	Love it.
Final Score:	46	This article is like candy dreams...in space.
Reviewer:	--Guildensternenstein 06:23, 26 February 2009 (UTC)