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| Humour:
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9
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Not too bad, I laughed out loud a few times (particularly when I didn't see things coming). This article does that a decent bit.
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| Concept:
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6
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Eeeehhhh... the "harmless-animal-turned-psycho-killer" bit has been done to death.
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| Prose and formatting:
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6
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You really need to break up the paragraphs and such on the article a bit less. Each section has only a sentence or two, whereas more encyclopedic articles (to be whorely a bit, The Cheat) can have several sentences to a section, but not as many sections to begin with. This path is usually preferable.
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| Images:
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8
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Lots of good images here, but perhaps too many. Also, there is formatting other than "thumb|right" available. You could get more room by shifting images to the left instead.
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| Miscellaneous:
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7
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I LIEK ARMADILLOES
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| Final Score:
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36
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So yeah, decent article. Could use a bit of work still, but the humour is there, and HUMOUR IS HALF THE BATTLE.
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| Reviewer:
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Ж Kalir, Awesome Author(alliteration affords additional awesome) 20:00, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
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