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Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Al Capone
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Al Capone[edit]
Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 04:00, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
Another guy to add to my to-do list (lol). This one could be a toughie ^_^ --User:Fag/sig2 10:44, 3 March 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | I laughed 7 times, which is actually a pretty good rate, for me. |
| Concept: | 7 | I think you bled all the jokes that could have been gotten out of this subject. Doesn't make you go, "Why didn't I think of that?" exactly, but still pretty good subject for ridicule, now that he's dead and can't kill us all anymore. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Good writing for the most part. The gangsta names got a bit repetitive, and I was a little disappointed none of them were named something like "Little Mik'" or "Master Fat" or some such, but all in all, not bad at all. |
| Images: | 8 | I can't think of any better images for this than the ones you used. Nothing brilliant, however, just servicable images. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | This article kept me off-balance enough to make me laugh more often than I usually do. It's certainly worthy of a vote, which is why I'm about to take it to VFH now. |
| Final Score: | 38 | As a whole, it feels crisp and clean and is definitely worth a read. Not sure if it's VFH quality, as there's nothing that stands out especially about the piece, but it's a solid bit of humor that's worthy of at least a look at the great vote up in the sky. |
| Reviewer: | --<< >> 15:47, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
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Sorry, fag. You took too long with this one.--<<>> 15:47, 19 March 2008 (UTC)