Talk:League of Legends

Pee Review[edit]

Humour:	7	Like the humour behind the hatred of the game. Hating a computer game is a common article and theme on Uncyclopedia however this is done well on your article. I personally don't find the David Turley comment funny but then I do not know who he is. A lot of nonsense creeps into the "History" section that tells a story more than encyclopedic facts.
Concept:	9	You know your stuff and there is plenty there.
Prose and formatting:	6	Please get it proofread. "Of some reason" should be "For some reason." Quite a few more English errors as well. It gets a bit list like near the end.
Images:	5	*The first two images are great. In the second image I cannot see the numbers you are refering to so please crop the image. More images further down the page are needed.
Miscellaneous:	6.8	Average Score
Final Score:	33.8	Please remember I have never heard of this game. It was funny so you covered that point. The article was very long which I have no problem with but I couldn't sit there reading to the end as I hate reading gaming articles. That's not your fault at all. From what I did read properly (up to "Losers") it looked very good. Perhaps get another user like Simsie to read the rest as they probably can stand gaming articles better than I can. Sorry, but good work and please keep going. Your final score shows a decent Uncyclopedia article with a bit to improve on (especially images).
Reviewer:	Sir ScottPat (talk) VFH UnS NotM WotM WotY 12:50, May 29, 2013 (UTC)

Sir ScottPat (talk) VFH UnS NotM WotM WotY 12:53, May 29, 2013 (UTC)