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King Harkinian

Click this link to see the page King Harkinian. I have not written this, but I want to rewrite it to characterize the King as a sick as twisted autocratic ruler, like I do in Faces of Evil and Wand of Gamelon. Should I take this path, and/or what should I keep/delete in this page?

Mrpastry909 (talk) 15:57, September 9, 2013 (UTC)

{{Review request|15:57, September 9, 2013}}

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-- Simsilikesims(♀GUN) Talk here. 18:48, May 28, 2014 (UTC) This article relies too much on memes, such as "Mah Boi", and one recurring concept in the article that the article is based off of, is that King Harkinian is the son of Burger King. This concept actually works well, since both characters wear crowns and have beards. This article also has too many redlinks in it. The idea of King Harkinian being fat and lazy and having little-to-no personality also works well, since it is truer to the game. If this article were to be rewritten so that King Harkinian were an evil dictator, you would need to explore his motives for sending Link out.

This was a Pee Review by -- Simsilikesims(♀GUN) Talk here. 18:48, May 28, 2014 (UTC)

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