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UnBooks:Now That You Are Almost a Woman

I tried to write this as it would have been written in the 1950s - sorta like the basis for my mother being so fucked up. Constructive and helpful criticisms welcomed. Dame GUN PotY WotM 2xPotM 17xVFH VFP Poo PMS •YAP• 01:31, 17 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	8	As I stated many times, I rather enjoying smart irony than sheer sarcasm.
Concept:	10	Clever satire of the oft-fantasized 50s.
Prose and formatting:	8	Almost there with the motherly prose, drifts a little at the religious parts.
Images:	8	50's what else?
Miscellaneous:	9	Already VFH grade.
Final Score:	43	She-humor, maybe a girl could enjoy this even more.
Reviewer:	herr doktor needsApistol  [scream!] 01:45, 17 May 2007 (UTC)

Ze Doktor beat me to it by a nose!

Humour:	8	Excellent! It's mostly sly-chuckle-inducing rather that laugh out loud funny, but there's nothing wrong with that. Very witty!
Concept:	10	Painfully close to the truth. An interesting follow
Prose and formatting:	9	Lucid, readable prose; I didn't proof read closely, but I didn't see any obvious speeling problems, or with and the grammar difficulties of.
Images:	8	Well chosen images with excellent captions.
Miscellaneous:	8	A well chosen subject for satire, and well executed.
Final Score:	43	An interesting follow up might be the seventies version (don't be uptight) and the modern version (starve yourself thin) of this sort of book. Just a thought.
Reviewer:	--Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 01:55, 17 May 2007 (UTC)

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Semi-protect

Seriously, this needs protection. --Starnestommy (Talk • Contribs • FFS • WP) 23:45, 21 May 2007 (UTC)

Nah, it's just the mega-wanker Gayson Kumbaya. He will vandalize anything we put at the front page. I have a bot tailor-fit for him, if just Mhaille gave me enough time to activate it. But Mhaille too ninja. -- SckrTrckrBot 23:47, 21 May 2007 (UTC)

That was me, with the bot account. -- herr doktor needsAsample  [scream!] 23:49, 21 May 2007 (UTC)