Talk:Black Adam
From Pee Review[edit]
| Humour: | 5 | Not many jokes per se; most of the article merely extols the power of the superhero character in somewhat exaggerated terms. |
| Concept: | 4 | Articles on comic-book/animated superheroes which do not place them in a broader parodic or satiric context are weak. I feel this article is conceptually weak because it treats Black Adam exactly as a comic would: as a comicbook entity in a comicbook world. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Technically fine. Restructuring would bring clarity to some of the sentences. |
| Images: | 2 | The image is just a pic of BA, no funny included. He should at least have the head of Daffy Duck or be wearing a tutu or something. |
| Miscellaneous: | 3 | Personally I dislike articles which claim that so-and-so is the mightiest fighter ever or the ultimate ruler of the universe or has the biggest manjunk around. There ain't neither parody nor humor in stuff like that. |
| Final Score: | 20 | |
| Reviewer: | ----OEJ 02:46, 16 January 2007 (UTC) | |
I have to offer a caveat: I have not read a comic book for decades. I may not understand what is being attempted in this article...although I have seen enough articles of a similar nature that I have to think it is nothing special. This is of course merely my opinion -- the insane ramblings of a madman. ----OEJ 02:46, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
Oh, funny thing -- I keep seeing the title as "Black Admin". Now that might be a funny in-joke article. ----OEJ 02:47, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
- I thought this was an article on the idea of a "Black Adam", as in Genesis. That would've been funny. --Señor DiZtheGreat
CUN AOTM ( Worship me!) (Praise me!) (Join me!) AMEN! 22:48, 22 January 2007 (UTC)
This kind of got out of hand? The original article was supposed to paint Black Adam's brutality as an ideal of civilized justice. It really lost focus, if he's still any good in the comics then I'll give this a real update. Also, I don't understand the signature format on this, I'm the OP. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by M0ng00se (talk • contribs)
- To sign a post on a talk page, type ~~~~ (four tildes). Romartus has further instructions on your talk page. There are no OPs. Spıke Ѧ 00:06 12-Jan-13