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Middle finger[edit]

How about I put up a fairly straightforward article this time. Pee on THIS! --Feengah 07:08, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Ill review it tomorrow...but there ain't much to review...im just to tired to right now. *yawn* --Happymonkey39 LAZAR.gifWeegeeheadbobin.gifDomo kun dance1.gif Dah Meme Master 04:51, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

You're from Canada, so tomorrow is today in your (our?) time zone. ;) --Feengah 20:15, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

5:11 where i live tight now. I usually do stuff round 11, but i may start.., ill get it done, don't worry. --Happymonkey39 LAZAR.gifWeegeeheadbobin.gifDomo kun dance1.gif Dah Meme Master 21:12, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Humour: 6.66 ...yes your score is 6.66...what? Anyways this thing clearly looks like it took you a while...or that you copied it from some website. Either way, it's pretty freaking funny.

What would have made it a lot better is if you use F's and U's or maybe spelled out a ton of insults along the way.

You could of had other little middle fingers on the page. Or have had a caption on the whole thing. Maybe made a screen-shot of the image, put it as one of those "posters" (which are the pictures with two captions and a black background). Maybe could be captions "The Middle finger", because a normal picture didn't show how much I hate you". Or anything along those lines.

Concept: 8.7 Well there isn't much a point in this article but i guess you followed your point. I mean the title is "Middle Finger"...and that pretty much sums up your article.
Prose and formatting: 8 I really don't know what to put for this in this case...i guess it's moderately tidy, but areas could be neat, mostly the boarder, it is uneven at points.
Images: 10 Well i guess it's considered a image...and it's done well so whatever.
Miscellaneous: 6 Im just going to point out the problems in the section. The pinky is a but too big, it should be smaller and on a different angle, it also looks lither there is a lump on it, and it isn't shaded well.

There shouldn't be any underscores, they don't look good and they stand out a lot.

Is there a thumb?... wait, yep, there is, but it isn't shaded properly. More shade, especially where it bends.

Final Score: 39.36 Well...don't know why you put it up for pissing. But i did it anyways...they better count it as freaking in-depth. Cause if not it better not count at all.

Im getting of track, good work, it looks like it took forever and well done!

Reviewer: --Happymonkey39 LAZAR.gifWeegeeheadbobin.gifDomo kun dance1.gif Dah Meme Master 21:54, July 30, 2010 (UTC)