Eltomas2003 (talk) 16:27, April 1, 2018 (UTC)
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Added 16:27, April 1, 2018 (UTC)
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[[Template:Review request/{{#time: ymd|16:27, April 1, 2018 (UTC)]]
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How and why is it funny? Any suggestions?
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 DAP Dame Pleb Com. Miley Spears (talk) 03:04, June 7, 2018 (UTC)
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I saw this here, but you're listed as author there too so that's OK. Really I think this is like a rough draft. "Is a Hentai RPG video game created by some dickheads from atlus for Nintendo who wanted to combine their weeb shit with Marths tiara. The game was designed for weaboos in an attempt for Nintendo to return to their pornographic roots." This seems like a list of insults but doesn't seem to fit the next part which talks about Communists. Usually a good way to write an article is to have an idea on what direction you're going. If you don't have a direction, that's Ok too, write anyway, then find direction as you're writing. But there should be something that carries an article through from beginning to end. Right now it feels like this hasn't found its direction yet. You might want to work on it some more. That can give you ideas for expanding it and for finding more humor. Good luck! |
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