Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnScripts: Genesis, Episode II: In the Garden of Eden
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UnScripts: Genesis, Episode II: In the Garden of Eden[edit]
While this is a personal favourite of mine, I may be too close to the trees to see the forest, or vice versa. Is this too obscure (who has heard of the "Torah" or "Bible", anyway?) to be funny, or vice versa? Sir Modusoperandi Boinc! 10:49, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 9 | I actually laughed out loud a couple of times during this--the running "vaguely" thing, was a bit weak, though. |
| Concept: | 9 | Having gone to a Catholic school for the seeming majority of my life, I feel like an expert in this particular region of study. Other people might not get it, or particularly care, but I thought it was great. Also liked the Star Wars parallel |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Meh. Isn't much to say for or against it. |
| Images: | 8 | Dey is good, chile, but dey is too fa to da side. Mix it up a bit, dearie. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | The intro was, IMHO, a bit loooong. Please, cut to the chasse. Thank you. And the last sentence in the intro was a bit of a non sequitur. It was funny, but seemed out of place. Could be worked in earlier. |
| Final Score: | 41 | All in all, I loved it. I don't think it was too too obscure, but some people just might not care.
PS: How would you be too close to the forest to see the trees? :D |
| Reviewer: | --Vana 23:56, 22 January 2008 (UTC) | |
Thanks for the review. I don't know about my own forest/trees comment. Sometimes I speak just to hear the sound of my own voice. You should hear it. It's really quite intoxicating. Sir Modusoperandi Boinc! 17:50, 23 January 2008 (UTC)