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I rewrote this one from the ground up... --~

Jacques Pirat, Esq. Converse : Benefactions : U.w.p.

02:40, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	7	Rather more classically satirical than comical.
Concept:	8	Good idea.
Prose and formatting:	6	Need a bit of touch-up. I changed "marshall law" to martial law, but unclear passages remain. "...A day which certainly would have been in mourning" for instance. A day on which the nation would have mourned? A day which would have been mourned by the nation?
Images:	9	Good use of historical and photochopped images.
Miscellaneous:	8	I like the piece. It's got a bit of political bite.
Final Score:	38
Reviewer:	----OEJ 19:54, 3 June 2007 (UTC)