Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Old hippie chick who's always collecting money
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Old hippie chick who's always collecting money [edit]
This has always been a person favorite and I'm thinking that it might be front page material. Dame 
GUN PotY WotM 2xPotM 17xVFH VFP Poo PMS •YAP• 23:50, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | This is pretty funny and acurate as to what a person of this type might be: nice and genuine, but slightly annoying. I would get rid of the "Silence of the Lambs" reference at the end and replace it with something else. |
| Concept: | 8 | Fits in well with the series. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Good, but there are a couple of punctuation and spelling errors that could easily be fixed. Runs a little long, but that could also be taken care of with the next section. |
| Images: | 7 | The pic of the lady with the bus is great, but it needs more like that. Perhaps pics of the lady's lesbian friends or of the tofu she ate at the block party. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | What exactly IS tofu, anyway? What does it taste like? |
| Final Score: | 39 | It's a good, accurate, and funny article. It doesn't lend itself to the "shooting fish in a barrel" quality that other articles in the Neighbors series do, but it's made to fit in well. It just needs more pictures to help the content not seem as long and add to the humo(u)r and some of the prose fixed. |
| Reviewer: | --Mr.Vib 13:27, 16 June 2007 (UTC) | |