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Old Testament Law[edit]

I'm hesitant to expand on this much more, but there are around 580 more commandments I haven't touched - and that's just from the "official" list. The previous edit was by PuppyOnTheRadio (Talk). 03:30, August 14, 2016 (UTC)

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-- Simsilikesims(♀GUN) Talk here. 00:43, September 10, 2016 (UTC)
This article is excellently written, and covers several points of Old Testament Law, including some that are widely disregarded, and some that are viewed as still valid. However, my husband is Jewish (not practicing however), and he often mentions that the Old Testament has a prohibition on wearing "mixed garments" - fabric blends, that is. See Deuteronomy 22:11 and Leviticus 19:19 for details. I think that should be incorporated into the article in some way.
This was a Pee Review by -- Simsilikesims(♀GUN) Talk here. 00:43, September 10, 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback. The previous edit was by PuppyOnTheRadio (Talk). 00:59, September 10, 2016 (UTC)
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