So, following an extremely helpful review by Boomer (Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Hyperbole/Japanese High Schools), I've made quite a few edits to this page. I'd like a follow-up opinion, if possible. Thx -Hyperbole 20:16, 7 May 2008 (UTC)
| Humour:
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8
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Well, I did't laugh hard, but I did get the jokes very well. It's obvious you have a talent for this kind of thing.
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| Concept:
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10
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Very original. I definitely wouldn't have thought of it at all. The concept itself will draw people in.
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| Prose and formatting:
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10
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Very easy to read, not cluttered at all. Very easy on the eyes.
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| Images:
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9
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Excellent use of cosplayer pictures here. The toilet was funny as well. The text is very well balanced with the pictures, and the captions were excellent, dude!
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| Miscellaneous:
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10
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No excessive usage of "penis" or anything immature like that, which is great.
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| Final Score:
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47
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Good job, man. Good job. This is front page material right here. I hope to see more of your work soon!
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| Reviewer:
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--Bomb 16:33, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
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