Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Walk like a normal person (3rd review)
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HowTo:Walk like a normal person[edit]
This is the 3rd review, and probably last review, of this article. I'm trying to get the article good enough for VFH, so a decent review would be appreciated. A decent review and changes to the article would be better. Thanks.
Velosi-T 13:08, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 9 | Very funny, it has quite a Pythonesque flavour. I like. |
| Concept: | 10 | Very original, I like it. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | I really like your writing style. It works well, and keeps the reader interested... just don't use 'Okay' too much. |
| Images: | 9 | All appropriate and quite funny. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | Looks like you're getting mostly 9s so far! :) |
| Final Score: | 45 | All in all it's very good and well thought out. I think you should include more forms of walking, esp. the Silly Walk which would fit perfectly. I think it needs to be a bit longer, but other than that it's great! |
| Reviewer: | Ravenix | |