Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be a Jehova's Witness
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HowTo:Be a Jehova's Witness[edit]
I would like some feedback on this.-Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 01:51, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 9 | Very funny. I lol'd at the 'What should I do now?' section and the thing about the Vietnamese sweatshop workers. |
| Concept: | 9 | Brilliant idea. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | It pretty well written, but a few sentences seemed strangely worded. |
| Images: | 7 | You could do a lot more in this department. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | With a few tweakings, it'll be ready for VFH. |
| Final Score: | 42 | |
| Reviewer: | -- Phlegm Leoispotter * (garble! jank!) 02:13, 11 June 2007 (UTC) | |