I'd like to ask you, my fellow editors, to leave comments. Since this is my first major edit, I'm pretty nervous about it, after all, I know nothing about the Zork series. Go to the page, and all the text on that page, and the pages that the links leads to are (perhaps) all created by me.
Due to some reasons, I mistook the page name, which should be here
IMADEANOTHERUSERNAME (talk) 11:09, February 18, 2018 (UTC)
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The previous edit was by PuppyOnTheRadio (Talk). 09:10, June 6, 2018 (UTC)
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It’s a page of Zork. There’s honestly not much else to say. Sorry.
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This was a Pee Review by The previous edit was by PuppyOnTheRadio (Talk). 09:10, June 6, 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewed[edit]
A little bit about the reviewer
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The article's overall quality - that indefinable something.
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 DAP Dame Pleb Com. Miley Spears (talk) 02:46, June 7, 2018 (UTC)
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Really I agree with what Puppy said. You have the beginning of an article here, but just the beginning. My articles usually start as Wikipedia articles and then I make them sporks, take-offs of the original article. But if I posted one of them at the beginning stages, people would probably just say, "It looks like a Wikipedia article." Remember too that some people may read this who have no idea what Zork is. Zork was an old game before I was even born. So think about writing it so more people will get the jokes. Good luck with your article!
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