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Evil[edit]
In-depth review, please! Has already been reviewed by OEJ who sorta liked it. • <May 20, 2008 [16:19]>
| Humour: | 8 | Very funny throughout, I love the concept. Let's see...when revising, I'd target the section where she interviews Satan, which I thought was least compelling. It doesn't seem you've got as strong a concept for that section. Maybe if Satan was set free because of the "cruel and unusual punishment," and becomes a hero in the eyes of the American public because he endured police brutality? That could be intriguing. Also, the "what has Barbara Walters learned?" section seemed a bit meh. It could be improved. |
| Concept: | 9 | Wonderful concept. The number of interviews seemed just right--not so many that it becomes repetitive, yet not too few either. The length of the interviews is good too. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | I only noticed one error and I fixed it. You might want to proofread it again yourself though because I tend to miss thigns. |
| Images: | 6.5 | Could use a few more images. You've got plenty of evil-doers in there...just add images of a few more of 'em and you'll be all set. Also, the caption for the Barbara Walters picture at the top seemed a bit...off. It didn't really fit with the writing style of the rest of the article. A new one would be nifty. And yes, I seriously did just use the word "nifty." |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | Averaged. |
| Final Score: | 39.5 | Splendid work. |
| Reviewer: | --THE 18:42, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |