Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/America is the best!!! (resub)
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America is the best!!![edit]
Alright, here I go again trying to get a review for this guy. Hope someone out there feels like looking at this article I wrote over a year ago. ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUN • WotM • RotM • AotM • VFH • SK • PEEING • HP • BFF @ 17:28 Mar 12
| Humour: | 7 | I like this. I like this quite a lot. It is slightly random humour, it has to be admitted, but it pulls it off well enough that I can excuse that somewhat. I particularly liked the first chapter, for reasons that I myself do not quite know. To make this better, you could expand the "How else America ROCKS" section to make each bolded part a sub-section header with more under them. |
| Concept: | 4 | Meh. Articles that are "America is [insert adjective here]" slanted aren't the most original sources of humour, and foreigners (such as yours truly) will feel left out and/or sick of them. However, you have extracted the humour from this dry well of a concept very well indeed, which makes this article much funnier than most of its kind. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Very, good. You've bolded just the right places, and spelling and grammar are all top notch. Only knocked down a couple because the prose is a little iffy, but that's to be expected with the subject matter. |
| Images: | 6 | The image currently there, while slightly amateurish, is very funny as is, and is a very humourous first thing to look at in the article. However, I can't shake the feeling that this needs another image showing America in an ultra-good image, to complete the article, as right now it seems a bit bare. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6.3 | n/a |
| Final Score: | 31.3 | This is a good article in my opinion, that, while definitely not FA-class, is still able to stand on its own legs very well. I wouldn't start nomming it on VFH though. |
| Reviewer: | –—Hv (talk) 12/03 21:50 | |
I just wanted to make sure that I made it clear that this is a rewrite. Thanks for the review! ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUN • WotM • RotM • AotM • VFH • SK • PEEING • HP • BFF @ 02:17 Mar 13