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Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Alaska (2)
Alaska[edit]
this article was placed on VFH when it wasn't finished. i stuck it back in the microwave for about 45 seconds, i think it's done now. my questions to you, potential reviewer, are the following: which parts are too long, too short, or lack humor? how can it be improved? most importantly, is it VFH-ready? as always, free prize for all reviewers. -- 22:58, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
I wholeheartedly approve. The first part seems a bit disjointed to me, but from there on out it's A+ material. I especially liked the parts about Geography and Mooseocracy. The Pictures and captions were also great. --Komodo Gallant 02:29, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8.8 | The humor is spot-on, and isn't random. You took limited resources (it's a state!) and did excellently on the funny business. I especially like where you point out that it seems to move around the map. |
| Concept: | 7.9 | Well, it's about a state, but you did a great job with it. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8.9 | Everything looked good to me. Nothing seemed to drag on, but I don't mind reading, myself. Especially since it was so funny. |
| Images: | 8.5 | Your use of images was relavant and funny, and you had witty captions. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8.3 | Average of the other scores. |
| Final Score: | 42.4 | You have a real winner on your hands. I'd nominate this if I knew how. |
| Reviewer: | Crazee Boy, OMGLOL FURRY | |
Just a few comments. I'm pretty generous and easy to amuse, but ask anyone, and I bet they'd tell you that this article is excellent. Also, where is my prize!?