rewrote today. looking to improve further. prize for reviewers. complete sentences useless. --SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 22:22, 1 October 2007 (UTC)
| Humour:
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9
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Very good stuff. I lolled quite a bit.
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| Concept:
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7
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Well, can't give you points for originality... but...
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| Prose and formatting:
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8.5
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Generally quite good, though a bit confusing here and there.
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| Images:
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7
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Pretty good, but they sort of get backseated. That's not a real bad thing. Perhaps make 'em bigger sized?
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| Miscellaneous:
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10
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This is a great article, loved the way you wrote it out. Mooseocracy? Genius!
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| Final Score:
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41.5
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Best of luck to you with this article. Where's my prize?
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| Reviewer:
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• • • Necropaxx (T) {~} 19:10, 2 October 2007 (UTC)
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