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UnScripts talk:Diary of A Cyber Sex N00b
Some Feedback[edit]
Try to improve the narrative parts (longer sentences without line breaks) and make this article less listy. Pictures are also a must-have. -- herr doktor needsAcorpse 
[scream!] 00:33, 18 May 2007 (UTC)
From Pee Review[edit]
UnScripts:Diary of A Cyber Sex N00b[edit]
First draft, still thinking of an ending. Any reccomendations? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Spatz (talk • contribs)
| Humour: | 7 | Funny. Very much like what I have seen in countless chats. |
| Concept: | 7 | The idea has potential. Something that many people have seen unfold |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Often hard to read. Try bolding the names so as to help with reading ease. Also, the title should be a banner on top of the page. Now that's classy. |
| Images: | 3 | As I just said, try making a banner instead of the side image. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | N/A |
| Final Score: | 32 | Sorry about the crappy formatting of this. It's my first pee review. I'll come back to fix it. |
| Reviewer: | Blixinator (I haven't set up a sig yet) | |