Talk:Xenomorph
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Nobody's discussing this? -BeelzebubJackson
I think the article is perfect, so there's no need to discuss. User:Lixiaofossil
Good article. A few original highlights. Your english is a little awkward -Is it your first language ? You could tighten it up a bit by cutting down on repetition and by referring to xenomorphs from other fiction and films although the term is original to the Aliens franchise.
- Some of the low budget ones from Dr. Who and Blakes 7 could are feeble counterparts and comparison to the Aliens ones could be funny . Would it be mean to say that it is closer to being a Wikipedia article than an Uncyclopedia one ?
- Kittens and Chuck Norris are jaded reference points and mostly drained of all comic potential years ago -your kitten exploding from the belly photo works ok but drop the Chuck references. Am I allowed to meddle with/tidy up your grammar ? ⦿⨦⨀ phrage 10:24, August 23, 2010 (UTC)