Talk:V for Vendetta
Bolding every V[edit]
May I? 65.127.223.98 20:49, 5 November 2008 (UTC)
List of V-Words (Educational Value)[edit]
Note on the words list: I personally liked that all of the words were the chapters from the V Graphic Novel listed in order. It was something of a fun little inside joke for all readers of the graphic novel.. Someone has since changed these to Vagina jokes... Any opinions? --epynephrin 18:30, 18 March 2006 (UTC)
- Anyone? Bueller? --epynephrin 15:48, 20 March 2006 (UTC)
- Change it back. --ZB 14:14, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
- Fair enough. Glad to have someone in agreement. --epynephrin 19:20, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
- Change it back. --ZB 14:14, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
Wiki-format Help[edit]
Does someone know if there is a way to make a three-columned list? The List of Words Beginning in V is actually pilfered from the first few chapters of the V comic, and there are about 20 more that would be fun to add (all very long, very complicated V words). Anyone help? --epynephrin 15:49, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
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- How is that? Copy the code as needed. --Splaka 04:32, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
- Excellent, Thanks muchly. --epynephrin 04:58, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
Random, Pointless Argument (with a coward who refuses to identify himself)[edit]
Oh wow, an article telling everyone to die for their government. My faith in humanity is restored.
- ...what? if there's any message in this, then it's the opposite. not to mention a few things: satire, humor, joke. Thanks for really reading. --epynephrin 17:26, 27 April 2006 (UTC)
- You might want to try taking it down a peg or 2... you know, for the simple folk. Zena Dhark…·°º•ø®@» 11:00, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
- I must be the only person who fails to see it as "telling people to die for their government". I'm not going to practice what I preach, though. I refuse. --epynephrin 19:25, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
- You might want to try taking it down a peg or 2... you know, for the simple folk. Zena Dhark…·°º•ø®@» 11:00, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
From Pee[edit]
Rolando8 14:25, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
Humour: | 6 | While your article did have humour and satire in it, I simply did not feel much of a temptation to laugh loudly in spite of myself. The six, to me, means that while the article is DEFINITALLY not stupid, it also is not too funny. One part that did make me laugh was the “List of Characters” section, as well as the promotional products (specifically the image). Just as a light recap, I know you already read it, but just go over HTBFANJS one or two more times, get a better feel for humour, and let it rip! |
Concept: | 7 | Overall, a well designed concept, gave the correct amount of emphasis on the article while lightly poking fun. This article followed the standard format of a wiki article, and for a movie satire, did a decent job of standing up compared to some of the ones I have seen. |
Prose and formatting: | 7 | The first thing I consider is the amount of red links in any article, which for yours, came out to be 10. Considering the size of the article you wrote, the red link to blue link ratio is ok, but could use improvement. As for your sentence structure, overall, I have no complaints, and the section in which V was talking, I understand fully was misspelled and mispronounced as per the way he spoke. My recommendation (that would be what you should do) is (meaning now) to get rid of (as in scratch out) the excessive usage of parentheses (They are good now and then, but you overused them) in ‘’’The Plot’’’. |
Images: | 8 | Your images were fairly and equally distributed (and not cramped together, therefore helping with the flow of the article) and they came with a healthy serving on one-liners underneath them. The first picture (Why it failed is beyond me…) was a bit confusing. Nowhere in the article is there any mention of V for Vendetta failing, so this feels just a bit out of place. |
Miscellaneous: | 7 | Averaged as per Pee Review guidelines. |
Final Score: | 35 | This article is definitely able to stand on its own, and I can tell you put a signifigant amount of effort into it. Your homework to improve this article is to repair the red links, remove the excessive parentheses, reread HTBFANJS, and explain the “Why it Failed” that I bought up earlier. To fix the red links, don’t forget that you can use {[[}, then put in {|}, followed by {]]} |
Reviewer: | Warm Regards, Javascap 12:44, 13 March 2008 (UTC) |