| Humour:
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8.9346432465
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Some parts were Really funny. In fact, everything was except for the first part of the beggining. From The spontainous combustion part on it was funny
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| Concept:
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5.5
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Kinda dumb, but you did make it work
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| Prose and formatting:
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9
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Very good, tiny mistakes here and there, but overall bravo
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| Images:
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8
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Also well done, but you didnt have a picture for shaq, did you?
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| Miscellaneous:
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5
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Quite random. Yet it was very funny. I give you props for making this up
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| Final Score:
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36.4346432465
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| Reviewer:
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Spats
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Thanks for reviewing dude, your right I'm not sure where I got the idea it just came to me. If anybody wants to write a second opinion feel free to.--Dr. Fenwick 02:35, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
Hoping that this could get reviewed as I'm stuck on what to do next. Please someobdy help me out!--Dr. Fenwick 00:59, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humour:
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6
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a bit meh.
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| Concept:
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6
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Toast? A rock band? What the hell?
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| Prose and formatting:
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7
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Well written
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| Images:
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7
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It's a good thing you have got images.
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| Miscellaneous:
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3
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You forgot the A
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| Final Score:
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29
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With more improvement, could be good.
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| Reviewer:
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 » >ZEROTROUSERS!!! EAT ME!!!! CRAZY PERSON! SMELLY!!! ILLOGIC, BEHOLD!!!!~» 02:30, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
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Proofread[edit]
~ Dame Ceridwyn ~ talk DUN VoNSE arc2.0 01:43, 07 August 2007
