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SweeTarts[edit]
This is about the popular chalk-candy product. Kinda short. The length isn't an issue, I want to know how I did with the writing and humor. --Señor DiZtheGreat 
CUN AOTM ( Worship me!) (Praise me!) (Join me!) AMEN! 22:56, 17 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 10 | Couldn't have been executed better, my boy. Superb job on the humor. |
| Concept: | 10 | Also excellent. Seemed consistent and very original. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Just because of the two red links. Get those outta there, and maybe add some more blue ones. |
| Images: | 9 | Only one image, but that's fine since any more would your text to picture ratio disproportional, and would create a black hole in Uncyclopedia. And we all know what happened last time that happened. I just wish the picture was bigger. Much bigger. I'd say about 2.5 times bigger would be better. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Categorized, no spelling or grammatical errors, and a nice delivery. |
| Final Score: | 48 | Great article. Reminds me of the Pop Tart article written by a certain person. :-P |
| Reviewer: | --Hotadmin4u69 [TALK] 00:26, 19 May 2007 (UTC) | |