Talk:Mime Wars

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Mime Wars is in serious need of attention. Marblefluss 20:45, 10 November 2006 (UTC)

On a related note, OMIGAWSH LETS GO PLAY HIDE TEH SALAMI IN MAH ROFLCOPTER Marblefluss 19:23, 12 November 2006 (UTC)

Dear Marblefluss,

This is the second Pee Review entry I have come across that you have posted. Twice you failed to add {{PeeReview}}, and I had too instead. Twice, the page should really be on VFD. This is not good my dear Marblefluss, this is not good.

Thank You For Trying Though,

--Sir Zombiebaron 03:01, 13 November 2006 (UTC)

Although I like the idea of mime wars, I find this article rather incoherent (do we already have an article about understatements?) and drowning the odd decent joke in a pool of mindnumbing drivel. It is an interesting attempt to incorporate the highest amount of random unrelated topics in one article, but it does slightly affect readability and content. Might I suggest rewriting it as an actual historical event, with less random objects being inserted in not to be specified locations? Surely two opposing armies of mimes trapping each other in glass boxes and going down stairs a lot can generate a more enjoyable article than this attempt? Dutchy 10:21, 14 November 2006 (UTC)