Talk:Las Vegas

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I would like to take this page apart and put it back together. Clean it up. Is any one opposed? Don't want to offend anyone by deleting but this is really a mess.--VegasBob 14:53, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Um, no offense, but you've made the page way longer than it needs to be. You should cut down on the first few sections if you don't want a tl;dr article. --PaizuMaj. • JStwMUNLOBCrapWHORE • (Talk) 04:27, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
No doubt. I plan on doing some editing here this week. I spent a lot of time just getting rid of the fart jokes. Should be tighter by the weekend. --VegasBob 04:33, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, cool. I'd be happy to help with this, if you want. --PaizuMaj. • JStwMUNLOBCrapWHORE • (Talk) 04:53, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
Check back Back Friday and see what you think. I'm working on this and Rachel Maddow at the same time and have started editing off line exactley because I was running on too long doing them both online. I'll start updating tomorrow.--VegasBob 04:56, March 29, 2010 (UTC)