Talk:Hannibal
Make it part of the story please 213.101.237.7 19:41, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
From Pee Review[edit]
I rewrote this completely after I saw it on VFD. --~ 
Jacques Pirat, Esq. Converse : Benefactions : U.w.p.
22:28, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 4 | It's more of a story of Hannibal if he was half-mental, rather than a satirical take on the man. |
| Concept: | 7 | I'm surprised no one had written about this yet. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | You were using subheadings, then you stopped. Why? Also, it reads very simply; spice the language up a bit! |
| Images: | 2 | You have one poorly photoshopped image. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | No real draw to the article. |
| Final Score: | 23 | The first paragraph wasn't bad, but you seemed to degrade from then on. The idea itself has a lot of potential if you could find a good satirical twist. Right now you're just not giving yourself enough to work with, and have subsequently gone for "silly" instead of "clever". |
| Reviewer: | Sir Judgement F@H UmP VFH {talk} 05:21, 24 February 2007 (UTC) | |
Some stuff are lame[edit]
I mean, seriously? YOUR MOM? Are you joking? Romaioktonos 04:02, January 26, 2011 (UTC)
Rewrite request[edit]
This needs a major revision. As I am working through classical Roman history - I have made a request to be allowed to have this put in the elephant dip and improved. --Romartus 13:09, 13 May 2009 (UTC)
It's ironic[edit]
That italian people in this article are defined "whites" probably by some american redneck, when historically people who emigrated in the US from mainland italy were defined "not white". And every show in the united states describes italians as non-whites (see American guy where the skin color of a supposedly italian is brown(!!) or even the simpsons where they are depicted darker skinned than the average american white man, which is not the case. What s the next option? maybe italians will became yellow!
Negroentrists[edit]
Negroentrists should stop claiming that berber-phoenician north tunisia of that time was black. (Southern) Italians might not have been considered white in USA because of the influence of the later arab invasion of Sicily. Read history and stop hijacking others culture and history
- First, sign your posts. Also I have no idea what you are talking about ('negroentrists'? huh??). I am aware the Sicily (and for that matter, Sardinia, Corsica and most of Spain) were conquered by Arab/Berber armies so what is this 'hijacking' business all about? --
RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 07:11, October 30, 2012 (UTC)
- OK I checked your edits. Just a reminder. This is a comedy website so if the writer had said Hannibal was an alien then that would have been ok. What can be changed if another writer can come up with a funnier or wittier approach to the subject. Your edits appear to be motivated by a different agenda. --RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 07:20, October 30, 2012 (UTC)
- OK I checked your edits. Just a reminder. This is a comedy website so if the writer had said Hannibal was an alien then that would have been ok. What can be changed if another writer can come up with a funnier or wittier approach to the subject. Your edits appear to be motivated by a different agenda. --
Needs work[edit]
Damn, I'm back from a year...or two in exile. Needs a lot of work. Would love some ideas/help --CrappyUncyclopedian1111 (talk) 23:28, October 17, 2017 (UTC)
- Elephants? Suggest you make a copy of the existing article and create it in your user space. --
RomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 07:58, October 18, 2017 (UTC)