Talk:Guy Ritchie

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From Pee Review[edit]

Pretty new to this uncyclopedia game. Done four articles, 2 got huffed. I like this one, so all feedback and ways to improve it appreciated. Also, how/where do I get the feedback from? 82.19.66.37 16:32, 13 April 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 It made me giggle, particularly Madonna/Maradonna
Concept: 6 This had to be done, and I feel it is needed. I think it needs to have more stuff in it, not necessarily longer, but more info/jokes.
Prose and formatting: 4 Too colloquial. try to make it sound like a wikipedia article, but with ridiculous bits. See Tony the Tiger for a good example.
Images: 1 Dude, seriously needs pictures. They don't have to be edited, just find some from Google, and give them some funny captions
Miscellaneous: 5 I think this needs work, but could be very good.
Final Score: 22 Bones of a good article, but a bit of padding out, maybe with some biographical stuff taken for a wikipedia article (but made funny. Hope this helps! Do you have a user name/page to post on?
Reviewer: --Don alun 09:42, 16 April 2007 (UTC)


Glad I've helped. Please post on my talk page when you've tinkered with it. Happy to do a re-review then. --Don alun 23:14, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

82.19.66.37[edit]

82.19.66.37, whoever you may be, sign up and get yourself an account! Dispel anonymity, he's a shadowy bastard!

This has the makings of a decent article, with - as the Don Alun pee review points out - some good Madonna/Cockney jokes thrown in.

But being a Cockney Lord of the Manor, Guy Ritchie is a comic goldmine. If you live in Britain you might've seen Harry Enfield's new show which takes the piss out of him quite succesfully - while not directly copying, ideas/hints can be found there.

Good luck finishing this --Sibley CUN - Communication! Contribution! Collaboration! 13:23, 29 April 2007 (UTC)