Talk:First Gradeism

Teh inspired! oTHErONE _(Contribs) 13:15, 30 December 2006 (UTC)

From Pee Review

Got generally high reviews in IRC, including some guy apparently clamoring for a feature. What do you think? -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 20:08, 24 December 2006 (UTC)

What an Idiot. Anyway.. Yeah I think the best bit is in the middle, showing the other people's drawings. --—Braydie 20:09, 24 December 2006 (UTC)

JKRowling and her sister

isn't that the picture in the tortured genius section?

Notes from IRC:

 <DavidGerard> Squiggle: i looked at firstgradeism
 <DavidGerard> middle bit's fantastic
 <DavidGerard> intro needs uh something
 <DavidGerard> to be more of a hook
 <DavidGerard> i dunno
 <Squiggle> Ok.
 * DavidGerard looks again at article
 <DavidGerard> intro and Early History is not great. not sure what to do.
 <DavidGerard> everything from "Legendary Drawings" on is fantastic
 <DavidGerard> the Leonardo pic is beautiful
 <Squiggle> Rei's work. Featured a long time ago.
 <DavidGerard> and ending with a pic from a child molester is just wrong and bad in an absolutely perfect way
 <DavidGerard> hmm. find a wikipedia article on some art movement requiring insane levels of technical competence and see if you can spork something from it?
 <DavidGerard> changing as few words as possible
 <Bradaphraser> ooh
 <Bradaphraser> that's a good idea

-- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 20:52, 25 December 2006 (UTC)

Anyone else want to comment? (the sole purpose of this edit is to move this back to the top of the Pee Review page) -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 01:51, 27 December 2006 (UTC)

I did a lot of peeing. Hope you like the changes. --Sultanofsurreal 02:46, 27 December 2006 (UTC)

Wow... I like. A lot. I actually laughed at some of the jokes you added, and usually I don't laugh, I just think to myself "Wow, this is good writing". And clearly, that was good writing. Really well done; I'm anxious to go look at your other contributions. -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 04:05, 27 December 2006 (UTC)

I'm pretty much a n00b... only a few contributions, though I've created an article and rewritten two from the ground up. I'm currently working on the creation of youth.--Sultanofsurreal 04:42, 27 December 2006 (UTC)

Oh yeah, you're the guy who made the brilliant rewrite of Me. For a n00b, you've done some great things. I'm gonna keep your name locked in the back of my brain for later use. Anyway, thanks for your additions to my article! -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 05:02, 27 December 2006 (UTC)

Added a new section for the personal lives of First Gradeists... check it out and alter as you see fit.--Sultanofsurreal 06:36, 27 December 2006 (UTC)

LOL! I loved it. Wouldn't change a thing. the only changes I made was the addition of more blue links and removal of the Red Links, and I switched the position of the Criticism section and the Tortured Souls section, but damn if the content isn't brilliant. Thanks a lot! -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 20:29, 27 December 2006 (UTC)

I took a look over it and think it's great. VFH quality, methinks. -- Hindleyite Converse 13:28, 27 December 2006 (UTC)

I was thinking so, too. It needs a little more polishing, I think -- but all the content is there. --Sultanofsurreal 13:51, 27 December 2006 (UTC)

This is so brilliant i'm surprised I didn't come up with it first. --AmericanBastard 21:34, 27 December 2006 (UTC) - Mrs. Tinklescheise's Special Ed Class for Arrogant Juviniles.

If no one else has any qualms, I think I'm going to put this in VFH later tonight. --Sultanofsurreal 03:08, 28 December 2006 (UTC)

I guess it's time to slap this sucker on here:

Thanks! Thanks to everyone who helped out! -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 19:50, 29 December 2006 (UTC)

What's with usin' my Tom picture as a punching bag for your jokes?--The Jeff Killer 00:36, 12 January 2007 (UTC)

What a fun article!

^_^ Mightydandylion (talk) Fk 09:43, 3 May 2008 (UTC)