Talk:Chickenbox

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• Anything we can do to make it better? I want to bring this article to VFH standard. ----Micoolio101 ^{(whine • vandalism)} 21:42, 4 November 2006 (UTC)

• Looks as if it were written by a borderline paranoid schitzophrenic that had been without their paxil for quite some time. I suggest taking out the Bush reference & replacing it with something else. Remove the Oscar quote. Keep the Russian Reversal regardless of how strong against anyone is about it. The group picture at the bottom of the article is crappy potatochop. Reinstating the boy in the chickenbox costume is more fitting than that picture. More criticism to come ^_^ 23:20, 4 November 2006 (UTC)

• The Taft reference is okay but the way the author goes about explainning it is all wrong. It sounds retarded. Taft was fat but it just seems too unreal & unfunny. Oh, & the article should be longer. 23:38, 4 November 2006 (UTC)

• the bush bit does need to go i think. replace it with something more about chicken holocaust. seperate the sanders section into two, the first about him setting up kfc, the second about adding the other foods and horrific recepies. the writing style is fine it mostly just needs expansion. replace the bush antarctica with more about bird flu, but less silly. something about all the birds cramped together means the flu spread fast and chickens were almost extinct, at one point only 7 existed but they got numbers back up somehow. barry white concert for chickens? - jack mort | cunt | talk - 03:49, 5 November 2006 (UTC)

• Question: Which image would you prefer? This one? Or this one? --Micoolio101 ^{(whine • vandalism)} 03:31, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
  • The boy in the chickenbox costume. 03:34, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
    • Maybe you should fix up the one with the group of people. I quite like that one better. --Micoolio101 ^{(whine • vandalism)} 05:00, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
      • I can only potatochop so much. If you can redo it better then by all means, help it. The chickenboxes in that particular have to be redone because they are from the original picture that everyone hated with a passion on the VFP. 01:58, 9 November 2006 (UTC)
        • Believe me, I can't even do MS Paint. --Micoolio101 ^{(whine • vandalism)} 03:14, 9 November 2006 (UTC)
          • I'm going to take the group image to the Reefer Desk. I've moved it to RadicalX's Corner. Someone help it. --Micoolio101 ^{(whine • vandalism)} 10:04, 26 November 2006 (UTC)

• Okay, I removed the Yoda quote and replaced it with an Oscar Wilde quote. --Micoolio101 ^{(whine • vandalism)} 09:05, 12 November 2006 (UTC)

• This page needs a big expansion. Anyone got any ideas? --Micoolio101 ^{(whine • vandalism)} 10:04, 26 November 2006 (UTC)

Support. Sir Sikon [Guest] F@H NS³ FIC CM² 01:47, 27 November 2006 (UTC)

Structure. 02:18, 27 November 2006 (UTC)

Just been reading this. My suggestion is write a section on how it's processed (i.e. preparing the chicken, cooking the chicken, etc). And don't forget all the cruel acts. --AAA! (AAAA) 12:06, 28 November 2006 (UTC)