Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Your Future
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Your future[edit]
Basically, this page was a piece of crap, so I completely rewrote it. Hope you like it.
* Flumpa 
02:51, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8.5 | While it wasn't LMAO funny, it was funny in various places, especially that sarcastic ending |
| Concept: | 7 | Its a silly concept, but its an expected result. Bad future. but, it had things that made me want to read it. it was funny. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Its situated correctly, but there were a few gramer & punctuat'ion problems, as well as a few things being jumbled up. |
| Images: | 8 | The first image was for added affect, so i understand. the Bush one at least had a funny comment, so yeah, and i liked the |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | Needs some spiffy extras, but there isn't much to say about misc. |
| Final Score: | 39.5 | A fine article, which i feel has a chance at being a front page article. Im not the strictest reviewer, but if you get a decent second opinion, SN&F this article and i will support you all the way. |
| Reviewer: | ~ NEZLR      07:49, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
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