Well, hey, I made my first article on Uncyclopedia. I know I have a terrible sense of humor and that this article could use some improvements so I'm asking for a Pee Review. EDIT:Put homor instead of humor >.< --156.34.12.107 22:08, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
156.34.12.107 22:08, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
- Well, somebody could review it for you in a week if your link isn't broken by then.
- This is
Madonna's DJ Jasper's signature. ProfileTalkASA 23:14, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
| Humour:
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10
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Excellent
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| Concept:
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10
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Great alternative history, future history!
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| Prose and formatting:
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9
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Corrected errors, watch those typos, but all A-OK man!
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| Images:
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10
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Damn good artwork. I'm a artist in real life.
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| Miscellaneous:
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10
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Really good work. Keep it up.
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| Final Score:
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49
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THAT IS A GREAT MASTERPIECE !!!!
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| Reviewer:
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Alien Hunter 00:11, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
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