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User:Taco Wiz/Alvin and the Chipmunks: The Movie[edit]
Taco Wiz 03:24, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
Alright, I'll give this one a go, I'll have it done by the time I go on vacation monday. --Mgr. Sir Sonic80☭ 17:34, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 4 | While I personally look down upon sticking your own personal thoughts into the article, It is not always looked down upon in article writing. Also, seeing as it is a very short one line, per section article, I have to take points away for the shortness. |
| Concept: | 7 | Anyone could make an article satirizing the Alvin and the Chipmunks movie, by just using the original plot to the movie and making it slightly funny, however I really enjoy the idea of Dave being a drug dealer, and the chipmunks making drugs, it could work out if you add a lot more to the article. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | While the formatting has no real errors, there are some spelling errors, including "If something is gross it is full of lulz. " seeing as lulz isn't actually a word it would probably be better if you replaced that with something better. Also the shortness of the article. I can't stress the shortness of the article enough! |
| Images: | 0 | Bring us the pictures |
| Miscellaneous: | 5.67 | Just averaged everything without images, seeing as it is irrelevant at the time being. |
| Final Score: | 22.67 | Well, it is really hard for me to give you an accurate idea of how this article is, since it seems very unfinished. I'm sure you can get more stuff into the article, and you should look for some pictures, or ask at the Image Request station for help. If I were you I would stick to finishing this article, and then re-submitting it for review, because the idea has some real promise. |
| Reviewer: | --Mgr. Sir Sonic80☭ 17:06, 26 July 2008 (UTC) | |