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User:Narf, the Wonder Puppy/Alberto Gonzalez Runs for President[edit]

For the person who reviews this, please, in the humor section, tell me if it made you laugh, not if it was "Amusing, yet not quite there", thank you. --Narf, the Wonder Puppy/I support Global Warming and I'm 100% proud of it! 05:34, 2 September 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 I'm into politics and I found parts of this humorous. I wrote an article with a very similar concept, UnNews:Alberto Gonzales claims he doesn't recall saying "I may have created confusion", and you might want to see that. I thought this question: What about Global Warming? After all, you have the same initials as Al Gore. was very clever. The rest, I didn't find that funny. See my miscellaneous comments for more detail.
Concept: 7 The fact that Alberto Gonzales just resigned from attorney general and is now running for President is a great concept, and that's where you get a lot of points, but Alberto Gonzales saying "I am not aware I may have said that," has been done before, and that's where you loose a few points. But that is still very funny and I would still keep that quote in the article.
Prose and formatting: 8 I'm not good when it comes to grammar, so just to be safe, I'd put {{Proofread}} at the bottom.
Images: 3 The picture you have isn't very good. I'd suggest replacing it with this picture. OR, if you are not satisfied with that picture, you can always make a request at UN:PIC
Miscellaneous: 5 There is only one paragraph and the rest is the interview. I'd suggest adding more actual and content and I'd get rid of interview. The question I thought was funny should be moved into a paragraph. Also, I'd suggest writing this in a professional mannor.
Final Score: 30 Alright Narf, this is pretty funny, and I think you could move this into the UnNews space. However, this still needs work. Take a look at the best UnNews articles Uncyclopedia:Best of to see how they write.

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: --Sir Manforman CUN.png 21:36, 2 September 2007 (UTC)