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UnBooks:The Autobiography of Jesus of Nazareth

Looking to get a few things answered. Is the length good, or should I add another section or two? Does my wording/language stay consistant throughout, and is there anywhere where the wording gets bogged down? Ummmm..... I think that might be it. Oh, and funny of course. Woody On Fire! Talking Woody Stalking Woody 14:21, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	6	The tone is simply too serious in some parts, while the overall story has a lot of funny potential, there aren't many witty one-liners that would add to the humor factor.
Concept:	10	This is a very good idea.
Prose and formatting:	8	Jesus would probably be just a tad more intelligent sounding. And you ramble on occassion (not badly).
Images:	10	Your pictures and comments are very good.
Miscellaneous:	8	It just needs to be a bit wittier, more jokes in general.
Final Score:	42	42
Reviewer:	Neighborofthebeast 19:41, 18 June 2009 (UTC)