01:31, May 27, 2014 (UTC)
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Added 01:31, May 27, 2014 (UTC)
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[[Template:Review request/{{#time: ymd|01:31, May 27, 2014 (UTC)]]
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--Danny7147 (talk) 20:04, January 7, 2015 (UTC)
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A few spelling grammar mistakes... nothing terrible!
- ...where it could "deal with" with the... you've got the word 'with' twice in a row
- Native Americans shouldn't have brackets around it
- Section two, a couple of commas needed here and there... " Johnny's archenemy a Santee Native American" needs to be "archenemy, a Santee"
- " with brand new horseless carriage" needs either 'a' or 'the'... "with a brand new horseless carriage" for example...
- Medical University of South Carolina link (near the bottom of section 2) doesn't work as the page doesn't exist. That's why it's in red...
Nothing major, good story! |
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This was a Pee Review by --Danny7147 (talk) 20:04, January 7, 2015 (UTC)
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