I know it isn't finished, but that's why I'm here. I just noticed that TERRIBLE Billy hayes article got the front page, and my product and spokesmen is much newer than Oxyclean. So the concept must be decent at least. I need approval for the bullshit I've already put in the article and would like someone else to add additional bullshit if they so see fit. Thx
71.111.202.179 18:02, 22 January 2009 (UTC)
| Humour:
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8
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There were quite a few good jokes, but some were a bit immature.
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| Concept:
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9
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I'm glad someone made an article about this- it's a great idea.
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| Prose and formatting:
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8
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Good writing, sentences are mostly good. SOme errors that I probably didn't notice.
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| Images:
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7
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Good pictures, but the Nazi one is too much.
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| Miscellaneous:
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8
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Needs a little less Nazi content, more biblical content.
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| Final Score:
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40
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Good article, needs to mature a bit.
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| Reviewer:
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erock199
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