TillDillBill (talk) 00:57, February 3, 2017 (UTC)
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Added 00:57, February 3, 2017 (UTC)
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[[Template:Review request/{{#time: ymd|00:57, February 3, 2017 (UTC)]]
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How and why is it funny? Any suggestions?
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--WeatherUnderground (talk) 20:48, February 3, 2017 (UTC)
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I read the introduction and the two first parts of the plot synopsis before I realized, this is going nowhere. The article is VERY long, which is okay if you have something clever and funny to say, and there are many parts of Rogue One and Star Wars in general you can lampoon. But rambling about random persons doing random things, only sometimes related to Star Wars isn't really going anywhere. There's definitely potential in your writings, the Cast section is very original. It's just too long, too rambling, and too far away from Rogue One - remember, people who look this up sort of expect jokes about the film, not just random nonsense. Good luck writing your next article as you certainly have a knack for writing, but this isn't very good I must say. May the force be with you!
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